here is the clear version: but not corrected!!!!
Torn apart
She is gone...
but she remains untouched
she never left,
her words are guiding us,
heavy on the soul,
it's hard to let go,
but I can't!I won't!
I tried,I knowed!
Sadly all things come to an end
time can't be stopped
loosen or forgot,
but you influenced us
in more ways than one,
nobody is winning
we all suffered a loss.
According to you
it's not the end
it's only the start,
things are about to change
in better to rough.
Deep inside smtg.ain't right
cold shivers empty heart,
a piece of me just torned apart,
will I ever be complete?
I quess not.
2 comments:
nice, sincere words, nostalgic times :)
the grammar mistakes are more interesting in their original way:)
multumesc miha,ms pt.cuvintele de sus.apreciez
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